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Don't give me the commas,
Give me the full stops.
I got your point at first,
But now it's turning to rot.

Just stop.
Stop talking.
It's driving me insane.
I can't block the words
That swarm around my brain.

I was swimming before,
But now I've sunken right down
Stop the currents, stop the flow,
Before I choke and drown.

I need that full stop
For I've now had enough.
Enough of your commas,
But oh, you'd better obey.
Move aside, stand down,
Or else I'll send you to the grave.
This has (another) weird inspiration.
Whilst talking to someone on an Instant Messaging thing, I accidentally typed a comma instead of a full stop, and in doing so my words seemed to lose effect.

But additionally, I'm feeling rather angered at the moment as it stands, the result of which is this poem.
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